Re: a comment on The Forgetting by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	4-Jan-06/3:09 PM
I really am dyslexic you Jerk.
Re: a comment on The Forgetting by Dovina	Dovina 209.247.222.89	4-Jan-06/3:08 PM
To say you were offended is illgical, given history as it is.
Re: a comment on The Forgetting by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	4-Jan-06/3:07 PM
Besides, mine was intended to sound like gibberish.
Re: a comment on The Forgetting by Dovina	Dovina 209.247.222.89	4-Jan-06/3:06 PM
You can't be serious, spelling it that way three times in a row? You were puloling my . . .er, ah .. .leg.
Re: a comment on The Forgetting by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	4-Jan-06/3:04 PM
I was offended by your penis comment. I guess that makes me the worst sexual offender by your logic.
Re: a comment on The Forgetting by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	4-Jan-06/3:02 PM
Whoops! Damn dylexia. "Tongue" I mean. What's with the penis talk?
Re: a comment on We'll be right back after these messages by INTRANSIT	Dovina 209.247.222.89	4-Jan-06/3:02 PM
Make that Alto, and I should.
Re: a comment on We'll be right back after these messages by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.138	4-Jan-06/2:57 PM
And you should go fly a plane. Basso, preferably.
Re: a comment on light [edited] by lmp	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.138	4-Jan-06/2:53 PM
Ha! Duh on me.
Re: a comment on light [edited] by lmp	Dovina 209.247.222.92	4-Jan-06/1:40 PM
I love this kind of question. It makes me feel so vulnerable and defensive. So, of course, I must answer, no.
Re: a comment on light [edited] by lmp	Dovina 209.247.222.92	4-Jan-06/1:38 PM
But 18 is. I count, therefore I am. If I were here, I would see it and swoon.
Re: a comment on The Forgetting by Dovina	Dovina 209.247.222.92	4-Jan-06/1:28 PM
Nor does mine. I was trying to portray the feeling of having forgotten all the connections that “paste” each new sensation to the known world. As he lost that ability, everything seems new and “unpasted.” But I agree that the last line may be over-the-top, and could be scratched.
Re: a comment on The Forgetting by Dovina	Dovina 209.247.222.92	4-Jan-06/1:22 PM
It's always the worst offenders who complain the most about the same offense in others.
Re: a comment on The Forgetting by Dovina	Dovina 209.247.222.92	4-Jan-06/1:21 PM
Since I'm female and do not have a tounge, "you" is hardly the right pronoun. You might as well tell me how paste feels on a penis.
Re: Half of All My Lies are True by Enkidu	ay deee 67.52.35.3	4-Jan-06/11:30 AM
quite confused, and not connvinced by the rhymes
Re: A Shortcut to Summer by Enkidu	ay deee 67.52.35.3	4-Jan-06/11:28 AM
whilst all the pretty knives... is a sweet line
Re: a comment on This Is Me by PoeticXTC	PoeticXTC 152.163.101.5	4-Jan-06/10:21 AM
ACTAULLY, poetry never has to be imagination if you don't want it to be. I can't believe you said that. Ignorance is bliss. If you were more open you would have caught my point in this poem like IMP has. This poem represents my inner personality not my physical. Maybe I should have put a brief intro as to what the poem was about. Right!!! that would defeat the purpose of my poem. Maybe it would pay to take a second look.
Re: a comment on This Is Me by PoeticXTC	PoeticXTC 152.163.101.5	4-Jan-06/10:14 AM
the point of this poem wasn't based on actual physical features, but actual inner characteristics. I just chose to personafy those characteristics.
Re: a comment on This Is Me by PoeticXTC	PoeticXTC 152.163.101.5	4-Jan-06/10:10 AM
being worked to the born doesn't mean it has to be scarred or cut. Hardwork from playing sports all the time and working hard in school. Not like moving boulders with my bear hands. Don't be so ignorant. A nice tight frame is the body on the outside, the soft cushy part reps. the inside. Sometimes it isn't natural to complete or achieve perfection. but it's worth it to come as close to perfection as you feel you can. (perfection is in the eye of the beholder.)this was an assignment that I had to do awhile back. The description is the most important part.
Re: This Is Me by PoeticXTC	Niphredil 132.68.1.29	4-Jan-06/8:59 AM
Poetry should be about imagination. Your step-by-step description doesn't provoke any thought with the reader; it's just a prettified catalogue of yourself. Perhaps more use of metaphor would render the poem more interesting; as it is, it bores me.