Sad, but true.

If this is true, Explain all the college grads in our government. Meh.

This one's ok.

Too blatant. Are you writing poetry or ranting. For the artistic rant, See: Pound or Ginsberg.

I don't know what to think of the mouse hole.

Duh, whassa Tamp tie ?

I like it all but the last line. It seems too obvious.

It starts as description and ends as sermon. I think it would be more compelling to describe the feeling for those in need rather than telling us to do it, what it's like to soar through life rather than saying we should soar.

It is those who are in darkness that see light most clearly.

It is true that they will find their way in time. I liked the thought put into this one. I didn't care for their father made the grade. I sounds to cocky. But all in all very interesting thought process.

I liked the ending verse. To plain need more of a messeage.

I liked the deepness of this.

very nice. A good read.

I liked the third line. Need an ending.

Not bad, needs a message? Ya think?

Short and to the point. Not suttle enough. Tone it down and add to it.

Very insightful words. My oldest son that is 25 now has been to Iraq twice now. God Bless him. I like this poem very much. Good description.

Interesting. Waves of time is cool.

I love this one! It says so much.

I didn't care for your wording in this one. Keep trying different styles.