I find relationships a more-certain way to have sex more often, and at minimal cost. Am I just that young?

Either everyone is misinterpreting this or I am. We have here, as I see it, a political statement in favor of truck drivers with some poetry added, and pretty good poetry to boot. I think you could lose the last two lines.

I just viewed the Help section and saw that a maximum of three poems a week is decent. I'm sorry for flooding.

Is it about some May flowers visible in the neon lights at night, and worth the drive?

Overwritten for what it says. Why introduce the King James English? The last line is good.

"mother naked" It's understated, as a political statment should be. You have not abused the system because you get four poems for being new. From here on out, you can only post once in 48 hours.

I don't see how the weatherman forces you to trust. It's all about probabilities. Also, Doppler is a short-time-range tool and does little to predict "rain all week." "gladdened cancer tales" is good.

This is very funny. It may not sell many cards, but it's good.

this story really drew me in, though like youve said there are parts that could use revision. i understand though, sometimes its more important just to get it all down than to perfect each phrase.

Is this a poem??

There are way too many intagible elements in here. I want something concrete, something that exists literally, to grab onto. More of the sweat and blood stuff, throughout.

I don't think of my life in the comfortable times between being awake.

...and it's coming closer as we say, every day but never believe...

This is a very good piece. However I am concerned about your fascination with middle age, are you trying to make yourself feel happier about the onset of drooping and the ceasing of your monthlies?

This is excellent. I might possibly give head to see a good movie about Filipinos.

It's me! I'm here! Nope. My shoe's untied. I guess I'm disqualified.

I knew that. I'll be posting a beeg wun monday morning. Make sure you have a comic book in your shorts. It's gonna be Krrraken. I'm.....al...most.....home....erghk.

I'm sure it reads fast for a reason but it also reads like a list. Take some 120 grit to it.

This better have an extreeeme catchy melody... Thanks for bringing the memory of The Turtles back. A very nice band from the era when boyz were still boys

There's definitely a Fabulous Furried Freak Brothers charm here.