Long debate.. and darky, heres some deleting! im sure you can post the soon to be MIA comments for all to behold.

does she have pony tails and a mini-skirt? 8.

As good a self pity gets.

It's missing something? Since we know you are ashes early on be fore you tell us you've burned, why say what we know? It's Rhedundant. Try this instead. When (Free verse) by Cairsten When they ask you what to say of me? Some day, not unthinkably far off... Tell them the truth. When they give me into your hands. Reduced to a pile of fine ash fit only to feed some lesser long-lived blooms... When they ask you how I would've wanted to be remembered? Tell them only this: I've turned in.

-inner taste- the bottom line to everything. I would like to see this updated in 3-6 months to hopefully include a mr. rockmage and a mrs. Italy angel. thank you for.....just being you.

Poems are not you forte'. You need to be arrested and hung by your testicles over a vat of molten lava.

It is such a struggle to be positive about our negatives. As self pity this is not pity enough.

Sounds like you need a vacation from yourself.

one lil x button.. its like playstation "ya know" bazooka'd city hall while nuking the white house coooool eh?

btw folks, its bad to have these loose ends like cuisine, because its a sign of some odd little blemish that will lead to some scandal. beware. Oh, and folks, "i have just covered up the proof of my retardation" BUT- getting all comments via email means that.. i can really post it all.. anyone want me to do that? (copy pasting from IE is quite easy, i just need to get the order of the messages right.. )

Well, you won a wanker award! That's even better than me parodizing you. Legal action? Will your fiancee help me rewrite the constitution? It seems weird al and mel brooks have been secretly planning to parodize Charleton Heston hunting with automatic weapons in the backyard (his) and no first or second amendment rights tsk. That's illegal. We should call the FBI! You know, if you view your pieces now, through my magical filters, they've really matured, and it's not like I blatantly copied them (though i did)? I even left some good quotes, from you, in both pieces.

What's your point? And don't say something predictable like "I don't give a shit if there's a point or not" or "There is no point because I'm on drugs". The truth of the matter is that there are reasons for all of your actions but those reasons are so mind-blowingly stupid and wrong that you'd rather pretend they don't exist.

In my experience, people who think they've had some sort amazing brainwave when they come up with the idea of making art out of everyday junk are wrong squared. Making art out of everyday objects is about as obvious a thing an artist can do these days without suddenly contracting into a quantum singularity of unoriginality. I've lost count of the number of times I've seen people on T.V banging on about "Oh isn't it wonderful that we've found a use for all this junk!" and "Wow it really is clever the way you've used that discarded nappy to represent poverty!" and "Doesn't this junk look great!?". No, it doesn't look great. It looks like a disgusting length of copper tubing that someone has shoved into an old mattress to make some sort of crappy otter. Not bad, though. -8-. "You ain't no MFA" hehehe. I seem to have laughed myself into some sort of hideous rant about junkyard artists. Do accept my apologies.

This does not appear different thatn before. Do you just start the process over hoping for differnt results?

OOPS! I jumped my gun. Ignore me. I was here before.

then we tripped balls and met god and wasnt no burnin bush- ill tell ya that!

Roaming animals don't do well in Zoos. Either do cud chewing cattle so take a picture before it's all gone back to the dinosaurs and meaty ferns

Pleasant, and a spiritual lift through nature. Especially now in a time of unatural crap abroad at every juxt.

I made the top ten, so I have no complaints!

(nod)