walrus8
on some deleted poem
16 Oct 2003, 5:14 AM
Splendid. -10-
Splendid. -10-
Splendid. -10-
Splendid. -10-
Everybody thinks Horus8 should patent the contraption "vulva holster".
strippers are old nudes, and that does not bare thinking about
like the paint brush theme too, not sure about the decorating cliche stripping off.
Oh yes and rhyming for the sake of it will not impress anyone, and is most likely to take your poem in a direction you do not mean and waste your time.
Yep like it, especially the way the last line makes everything clear.
A little bit patronising and racist though.
I AM SUPERB
THEREFORE I MUST VOTE -10-
He'll be back for the nails!
I like this, clever but why did his pet hatreds leave when he bought the nails.
Greed is greed. Why slave to the #? Silly!
Like in "The Sixth Sense?"
Will these hands ne'er be dry?
Definite impression of fun and the having of it. Good Job. Good image.
Drugs are boring.
Sheepies are fun.
Like it always does.
A pole-less flagling.
I hate gym shoes. I hate poop. I hate dancing. But I love poetry 9.