Great! X

I like this much better than the first, It seems to have more life, but who am I to say?

Sure is BUddy

I just tried to fix some. I hope it doesn't cause too much pain between your temples.

Well, my dear, for starters, ease off, it doesn't make it any better. Good vent though, keep it comin'.

And you will find it. Maybe you already have?

A good starting point (IN whatever order)

Yes, yes you will.

return library books Stop listening to downloaded audio books all nightlong. Masturbate. buy some honey.

"She smiles as she cries telling her late husband About how tall Billy’s getting." If you lost this? Good God, this would swing. 10.

dynamite

try damien hurst and you'll make yourself blled from scratching. very true point.

I like the write. Don't like the topic. You seem to do haikus well.

Damian Hurst? Archaeology? Can you help me refine my search sir?

I liked "I see promise" (in my son's eyes). But, don't we choose who we love, that is, except our children? Also liked "I passed you at birth" (!!)

sums it up, all right.

half great, all fun

;)

funny.

Wonderful! I especially like the way you've spaced the lines "fold it neatly and let it rest/ on my work desk" This works really well and gives a sense of pause which is relevant to the poem. Well done-10, am now off to read some more of yours!