NanceXToo
on Alone Together by lynnkyle
31 Jan 2004, 1:00 PM
I think it could work either way
heh.
oops. hadn't signed in. well anyway, i upped the vote a little. didn't wanna judge it just on the fact that it's not my style. it's still pretty cool. still think you should use a more original word than "lovely" though.
hmm yeah, point taken.
wow
yes! i relate, living nearby what is (supposedly) one of the fastest-growing (spawning?) spots in all of Canada.
Image conveyed in totality. Our lives these days are filled with meaningless words--this is just right.
um.
Particularly like... stock-broke potentate mummy bereft of organelles or tissue. Very stark.
Just noticed how many times you have zeroed me and left no comment as to why. Returning the favor.
"P.S. I dare you to check my IP" - should we have been surprised?
creep creep creep
You have good language. For any other advice, you should read all the comments at the bottom of this page: www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=7
It's no lord of ya rings, but yes I LIKKED IT.
practically perfect...9 sound good?
There is more to life then just sex. Like compassion, love, a kind-heart heart, and a millions of other things you can't find just by going around having sex. NOT saying sex is a bad thing, but it's just so much better with someone you care for. I honesty couldn't tell you how many numbers I have gotten by just reading a poem I have writen at a club or something like that. Sometimes I would go against my own judgement and sleep with them, but how I wish I hadn't because now I'm more empty then when I started.
it's very clever, 7-8
wrong, take a walk DTR
well, it isn't bad