| regarding some deleted poem... |
30-Aug-02/1:01 AM |
|
Very graphic-format a little disconcerting-loved it. 10/10
|
|
|
 |
| regarding some deleted poem... |
30-Aug-02/1:02 AM |
|
|
|
| Re: Meta by nentwined |
30-Aug-02/1:05 AM |
|
Infuriating and good at the same time-8/10
|
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
2-Sep-02/12:32 AM |
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
3-Sep-02/8:12 AM |
|
I liked it, I think a little was lost by using acoss and cross-wise, a little messy. Not sure about the transfixion either -still enjoyed the imagery
|
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
3-Sep-02/8:24 AM |
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
3-Sep-02/8:34 AM |
|
Purple rocks-a bit scary this but I enjoyed it-9/10
|
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
3-Sep-02/8:39 AM |
Unusually violent, why call it 99 ?
Great work
|
|
|
|
| Re: THE PAIN OF LOVING by longships |
3-Sep-02/8:41 AM |
|
A terrible glimpse of what awaits us all-well done
|
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
3-Sep-02/8:46 AM |
|
It reminds me of a middle-aged man trying to get into the mind of a person he just ain't. Feels stilted
|
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Sep-02/12:30 PM |
|
|
|
| Re: Work by poetandknowit |
9-Sep-02/5:09 AM |
|
Ok truce, this was seriously good. You are quite right, my efforts are pathetic compared to others here and this one of yours. I will try to redeem myself.-10/10
|
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Sep-02/5:18 AM |
Whatever it is you make me want it ! Please clear up the typos as it detracts from some well penned material.
sensless=senseless. Also better is ...I am AS real as a toothache..
Also ..I am better THAN any treasure.
"Stubborn and exquisite" reminded me of dear Emily D . 9/10
|
|
|
|
| Re: Tugboats by poetandknowit |
19-Sep-02/5:27 AM |
|
This poem does not lack experience-9/10
|
|
|
|
| Re: Tugboats by poetandknowit |
19-Sep-02/5:27 AM |
|
|
|
| Re: Tugboats by poetandknowit |
25-Sep-02/11:07 AM |
I give this 10, because I can. And as for bigbigdog/astro-glide,cfarm/mentor/fred cadawalter/Turbo-Tom/Shrimp-Kills
Ignorance is a rare exotic fruit; touch it, and the bloom, has gone.
|
|
|
|
| Re: Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore |
1-Oct-02/2:50 AM |
|
I enjoyed this and thought it had merit.
|
|
|
|
| regarding some deleted poem... |
1-Oct-02/5:05 AM |
|
Hmmm-not too sure about this one
|
|
|
|
| Re: Conversations with a Clock II by morffrom |
1-Oct-02/5:10 AM |
|
Agree with Z, this is better than 1
|
|
|
|
| Re: Conversation with a Clock III by morffrom |
1-Oct-02/5:11 AM |
|
|
|
