regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jul-04/6:16 AM
yah. life....strife....i couldn't go on either. sorry.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jul-04/6:18 AM
you know not what to say...indeed. perhaps a little heroin would get you started.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Jul-04/4:57 AM
well...i think the poem is average. but you should get many 10s from god's children
Re: A Girl’s Climax by Dovina	12-Jul-04/5:00 AM
I cannot imagine what one could find ambiguous about this poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Jul-04/7:27 AM
sweet fern raises a question that i cannot answer. are ferns sweet?
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Jul-04/7:29 AM
a triumph
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jul-04/9:31 AM
estomos should be estamos y lo encontro...encontro should be encuentro or encontraste unless you mean he, she or it found it, in which case...encontro'
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jul-04/10:54 AM
nuestro futura should be nuestro futuro.
Re: I dreamt a white Black widow by INTRANSIT	20-Jul-04/9:44 AM
where da white womens be at??? excellent cockrings and machineguns...staccato whispers.
Re: Four and a half paragraphs of silence by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	20-Jul-04/9:45 AM
unspeakable
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Jul-04/9:47 AM
fake tits in a baggy sweater.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Jul-04/9:49 AM
i like it
Re: Poor Unwritten Rabbit by Dovina	20-Jul-04/10:03 AM
why illumine and not illuminate?
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Jul-04/7:18 AM
great screen name. i have no fucking clue about the poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Jul-04/12:36 PM
oi vey...such a chubby this gives me.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Jul-04/5:39 PM
A kyrielle sonnet is 14 lines of iambic quatrameter broken into 3 quatrains and a final couplet, the end of each containing a repeating phrase. This is a typical rhyme scheme: aabB ccbB ddbB aB
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Jul-04/7:07 AM
I like the slow sad understated tone, and there are some really good turns of phrase contained. At the park where we Use to listen to Concert bands 'til dark, now Nothing sounds in tune this, in particular, feels just right, except, I think used instead of use. or perhaps just: at the park where we once listened.... it is difficult to pull of the old, "you're gone, I'm sad and alone" theme in a poem, but I think you have done it pretty well.
Re: peanut butter sandwiches on a hot summer day by w~* ATHENA *~w	25-Jul-04/7:30 AM
did you spread it on toast? or did he shoot it in too deep?
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Jul-04/7:57 AM
does she have a penis?
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Jul-04/8:13 AM
i think that one "never" would work better