Re: A bar without alcohol by tre	13-Apr-04/8:22 PM
I think this poem is hilarious in weird ways. For doing such a good job with a topic such as the gym, I give it.. a TEN!
Re: a comment on lost memories by ggawrysi	12-Apr-04/4:06 PM
Does ggawrysi go to AU? I came across this poem of his using the "random" feature. Huh. Interesting.
Re: "How Often, Under Starry Skies" by anastomosis	11-Apr-04/10:31 PM
As a philosophy major, I really enjoy the topic of this. <grin> Good job.
Re: lost memories by ggawrysi	11-Apr-04/10:29 PM
Beautiful.
Re: Cabbagetown will miss you by tre	8-Apr-04/9:59 PM
oh my dear it is so long... I also think it can be cleaned up, possibly by making the lines more of a standard length... it's jumbly when there's one really long line followed by something so short... however, there is some good imagery and description going on... I think towards the end though all the particulars started to confuse me, I got a little lost up in them instead of the meaning behind the writing...
Re: a comment on dc by jsd	8-Apr-04/8:55 PM
yesssss I like your spruced-up version better. thanks for the help!
Re: Over you by tre	6-Apr-04/5:46 PM
Heh TR I think it's kind of funny... and the line "I hate that you can even make my rhyme." is appropriate for this poem as you usually don't rhyme :)
Re: a comment on ode to summer dreams by jsd	2-Apr-04/11:12 PM
haha oh my... Didn't mean it like that. The "hole" to which I referred is more like a void in one's heart or soul.
Re: a comment on ode to summer dreams by jsd	2-Apr-04/11:11 PM
thanks - the wheels roll line is actually one of my favorites, because a lot of this has to do with driving long hours to meet up with someone I didn't get to see often. thanks for your comment!
Re: a comment on post-rock messiah by jsd	1-Apr-04/7:28 PM
Hello... Not too into Jim Morrison, nothing against him, but I've never really listened. :)