regarding some deleted poem...	30-Mar-04/6:37 PM
I love this. Thanks for welcoming me to poemranker!
Re: Over you by tre	6-Apr-04/5:46 PM
Heh TR I think it's kind of funny... and the line "I hate that you can even make my rhyme." is appropriate for this poem as you usually don't rhyme :)
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Apr-04/5:47 PM
I think the first stanza flows well, has a nice beat to it...
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Apr-04/5:49 PM
The last two stanzas are what really make it for me, and yeah the lines should be broken up differently, but I mentally just kind of split them where I felt the natural break should be... the weird line breaks certainly don't prevent the pattern of it from coming out, especially near the end, because it's so well done there :)
Re: Cabbagetown will miss you by tre	8-Apr-04/9:59 PM
oh my dear it is so long... I also think it can be cleaned up, possibly by making the lines more of a standard length... it's jumbly when there's one really long line followed by something so short... however, there is some good imagery and description going on... I think towards the end though all the particulars started to confuse me, I got a little lost up in them instead of the meaning behind the writing...
Re: lost memories by ggawrysi	11-Apr-04/10:29 PM
Beautiful.
Re: "How Often, Under Starry Skies" by anastomosis	11-Apr-04/10:31 PM
As a philosophy major, I really enjoy the topic of this. <grin> Good job.
Re: A bar without alcohol by tre	13-Apr-04/8:22 PM
I think this poem is hilarious in weird ways. For doing such a good job with a topic such as the gym, I give it.. a TEN!