| Re: a comment on Rambling by terbenaw |
24-Feb-06/2:17 PM |
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| Re: Gaia and Man by Blue Magpie |
24-Feb-06/1:42 PM |
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I enjoyed this. It's a bit long, but for some reason, it seems to fit in it's current form. I like the creativity used with the end rhymes, but, I feel that it has limited the scope of the poem in some ways as well. All in all though... this is excellent.
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| Re: a comment on Rambling by terbenaw |
10-Sep-05/11:28 AM |
"Riddled with duality, I am told
Yet I consider it differently, as it comes from my soul"
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Hmm... it kinda makes sense... hmm...
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| Re: a comment on Rambling by terbenaw |
10-Sep-05/11:26 AM |
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A few of those words actually were considered, but... I just didn't think they would work with what I was trying to do.
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| Re: a comment on Rambling by terbenaw |
9-Sep-05/10:13 AM |
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Thank you for the comment, but... just omit it? I don't think it would make sense if I do that. What would you replace that phrase with in order for it to make sense?
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| Re: a comment on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
2-May-04/1:51 PM |
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Oh BTW: I wrote Pain and Depression when I was about 13.
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| Re: a comment on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
2-May-04/1:50 PM |
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Sorry DA... I don't even LISTEN to Nine Inch Nails... I'm a hip-hop head DumbAss.
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| Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin |
1-May-04/3:01 PM |
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Beautiful wordplay... well thought out... beautiful overall.
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| Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
1-May-04/2:50 PM |
I give you a TEN... minus ten. Heh.
You're not a very nice person, and your poetry follows your attitude - it's not nice either.
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| Re: a comment on Depression by terbenaw |
23-Mar-04/1:38 PM |
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I sorry, but may you clarify the meaning of your message?
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