| Re: Darkness by KathrynR |
15-Aug-02/4:31 PM |
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Sorry Kathryn, when I read your 1st poem Idid not realise your tender years and would now change my mark to 9.This one also is excellent and deserves another 9.Keep it up.Now get TO BED!!!.
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16-Aug-02/7:24 PM |
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Best one I've seen in this form since joining the site.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
16-Aug-02/7:32 PM |
Yeah, you know what they say - dying is the best career move you can make.
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| Re: The War by Tarquin De La Bog |
16-Aug-02/7:42 PM |
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| Re: C Words by RWAndersen |
16-Aug-02/7:47 PM |
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Can't concur, considered clever.Clearly capable creator.Continue contributing.
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| Re: The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram |
16-Aug-02/8:05 PM |
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Sorry had to post this deeply sentimental and personal work. Thanks for going easy with first grading and comment.
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| Re: Wondering by anagram |
16-Aug-02/8:44 PM |
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So sorry to have to have inspired such ire Tarq. (hope you don't mind me calling you Tarq.).That is twice you have had a go at my rhyming ability without explaining the reason for your low opinion.Please expand,I would be grateful. I have read 1 or 2 of yours which were open verse, do you just dislike true poetry that rhymes or can you not catch on to the cadence.
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| Re: The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram |
16-Aug-02/8:52 PM |
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| Re: The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram |
16-Aug-02/8:54 PM |
Mainly in Glasgow Frass but I'm told they are devine. Thanks for the support.
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| Re: The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram |
16-Aug-02/9:02 PM |
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Perhaps didn't word that very well.I was responding to a criticism of my rhyming ability from one who seems to only write open verse. I enjoy all forms but prefer Rhyming poetry.
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| Re: Wondering by anagram |
16-Aug-02/9:05 PM |
-- 16-Aug-02, 09:02 PM
Perhaps didn't word that very well.I was responding to a criticism of my rhyming ability from one who seems to only write open verse. I enjoy all forms but prefer rhyming poetry.
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| Re: The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog |
16-Aug-02/9:11 PM |
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I enjoyed the "War" poem and voted accordingly but chose to keep 'Queens council' on this one, but as we are apparently being brutally honest - this one is SHITE and struggled to be considered a zero.
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