Re: Blinking by zodiac	14-Mar-04/8:00 PM
You could surprise me and you did.
Re: a comment on To Avalon by annabellee	30-Jan-04/9:32 PM
Thanks. If you can come up with something stronger, I'm listening. Writing in his style can be torturous. I think I'll let the swelling go down before giving it another go.
Re: How to sleep sitting up by Bachus	30-Jan-04/8:51 PM
WOW! That's powerful stuff! 10 and that's the only 10 worth it I've seen so far.
Re: a comment on Zinnias are a funny flower by Bachus	30-Jan-04/8:45 PM
I get it and like it. 9
Re: In love as in war by zodiac	30-Jan-04/8:11 PM
I felt the thud- -Ing. 9
Re: Lonely Hearts by cjg	30-Jan-04/7:56 PM
This is good. 8
Re: Of an Age Before by cleverdevice	30-Jan-04/7:53 PM
"long lush fronds" take us right out of the desert. The contrast doesn't make sense.
Re: Do you have a hard time... by <{Baba^Yaga}>	29-Jan-04/10:09 PM
500 lbs. of salty justice. That's a bit much. For any man!
Re: a comment on To Avalon by annabellee	29-Jan-04/10:02 PM
Thanks. It was good to see someone recognize this. I’m not sure Tennyson would approve. Although, I like to imagine he would at least commend the effort. Imitation is after all the highest form of flattery and in this case, brought inspiration to a word-weary poet. I like the changes you made to yours. I’m sure I’m nit picking but I’m still not satisfied with <we be> it is better though. I’m not familiar with the poem you mention. I’ll see if I can find it.