Re: Lost and found by INTRANSIT	30-Mar-04/11:21 AM
What are we looking for? A little more intrigue perhaps?
Re: Kites In My Sky by anitawit	1-Apr-04/1:05 PM
The ending is a bit choppy rhythmically
Re: My Enemy by tacochick1666	3-Apr-04/2:24 PM
Spelling and punctuation...
Re: SEASON OF WINTER by galaxy4unknown	8-Apr-04/6:18 AM
Foam in winter? A couple of spelling errors.
Re: Liar by Babigurly69	10-Apr-04/2:16 PM
More like a top-40 song than a poem
Re: this feeling by gmoney8469	10-Apr-04/2:17 PM
top 40 song or poem?