on Lost and found by INTRANSIT
30 Mar 2004, 11:21 AM
What are we looking for? A little more intrigue perhaps?
on Kites In My Sky by anitawit
1 Apr 2004, 1:05 PM
The ending is a bit choppy rhythmically
on My Enemy by tacochick1666
3 Apr 2004, 2:24 PM
Spelling and punctuation...
on SEASON OF WINTER by galaxy4unknown
8 Apr 2004, 6:18 AM
Foam in winter? A couple of spelling errors.
on Liar by Babigurly69
10 Apr 2004, 2:16 PM
More like a top-40 song than a poem
on this feeling by gmoney8469
10 Apr 2004, 2:17 PM
top 40 song or poem?