poemranker ::this feeling by gmoney8469

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Free verse № 51816

this feeling

Member since 2003 · Posted 5 Jun 2003 · 4 comments

i cant find the words to express how i feel , so let me have your heart i promise ill be real , you might think of the worst , but remember the best , its me and you girl so forget the rest , i cant be with you at times , but your always on my mind , baby you will never find , a love as true as mine , i pray to god all the time , that you will always be mine , so i hope as you read this line by line , you realize i want you to be mine , until the end of time.

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4 comments

[n/a] Schizophrenic 5-Jun-03/8:08 PM Reply
Sounds like you're going Tupac.
[3] Jeremi B. Handrinos 6-Jun-03/12:54 AM Reply
This feeling, so so deep, I am grammatically unable to explain it or spell it.
[0] beakism 6-Jun-03/5:34 AM Reply
I see you've worked hard at making original and inventive rhymes:

mind
mine
mine
mine
time

good work. 10.
[4] anyone 10-Apr-04/2:17 PM Reply
top 40 song or poem?