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this feeling (Free verse) by gmoney8469
i cant find the words to express how i feel , so let me have your heart i promise ill be real , you might think of the worst , but remember the best , its me and you girl so forget the rest , i cant be with you at times , but your always on my mind , baby you will never find , a love as true as mine , i pray to god all the time , that you will always be mine , so i hope as you read this line by line , you realize i want you to be mine , until the end of time.

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.75
Weighted score: 4.6125903
Overall Rank: 12425
Posted: June 5, 2003 8:03 PM PDT; Last modified: June 5, 2003 8:03 PM PDT
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[n/a] Schizophrenic @ 63.237.171.75 | 5-Jun-03/8:08 PM | Reply
Sounds like you're going Tupac.
[3] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 6-Jun-03/12:54 AM | Reply
This feeling, so so deep, I am grammatically unable to explain it or spell it.
[0] beakism @ 81.86.208.92 | 6-Jun-03/5:34 AM | Reply
I see you've worked hard at making original and inventive rhymes:

mind
mine
mine
mine
time

good work. 10.
[4] anyone @ 172.163.179.37 | 10-Apr-04/2:17 PM | Reply
top 40 song or poem?
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