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Kites In My Sky (Free verse) by anitawit
(9.9.99) My eyes opened on an empty sky But the colour was blue Of deep deep cobalt; Of big and small Pieces of fortune I made my choice I watched my sky Fill up There are now Many kites in my sky.

Up the ladder: Romans 8

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7684
Posted: May 1, 2003 1:09 PM PDT; Last modified: May 1, 2003 1:09 PM PDT
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[7] anyone @ 156.99.105.188 | 1-Apr-04/1:05 PM | Reply
The ending is a bit choppy rhythmically
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