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Kites In My Sky (Free verse) by anitawit (9.9.99)
My eyes opened on an empty sky
But the colour was blue
Of deep deep cobalt;
Of big and small
Pieces of fortune
I made my choice
I watched my sky
Fill up
There are now
Many kites in my sky.
Up the ladder:
Romans 8
Down the ladder:
âDeath To Doughboyâ
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Posted: May 1, 2003 1:09 PM PDT; Last modified: May 1, 2003 1:09 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7733 Comments:
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anyone @ 156.99.105.188
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1-Apr-04/1:05 PM
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The ending is a bit choppy rhythmically
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