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Romans 8 (Free verse) by Freethinker1602 I was slippin so fast
Couldn't grab hold of reality
Lost sense of all direction
No longer able to find hope
Thought I'd given in
Couldn't escape the void
No one heard me scream
No one saw my struggle
I tried to believe I was ok
Wouldn't have believed it
I'm feeling out of control
It doesn't hurt any more
I just gave in so nothing could hide
I saw my chance for redemption
So I held on and never let go
Life is too precious
Laugh it off and revel in the glory
the chaos now tolerable
Passed the trouble now
All I needed was to heed the good word
Found by the light now I feel full again
Have faith
Spread the word
Up the ladder:
power play
Down the ladder:
Kites In My Sky
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Posted: April 22, 2003 7:57 PM PDT; Last modified: April 22, 2003 7:57 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7732 Comments:
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Amelia @ 198.146.136.46
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23-Apr-03/7:45 AM
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Sounds like a Kirk Franklin song. Spread the word Brother! :)
Just remember-there's always somebody who's got it worse. Could I put in a request for a happy poem? Not to worry, hee hee!
Anyways, I like the ending here-I'll give it an 8 Good morning everybody (unless you're over here in which case Good evening)
the funny thing is that's my phylosophy some where many people have it worse. Sure my life is screwy but I thank god it can go away.
and cool beans about kirk franklin....I strayed from the light 241 view(s)
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