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Kites In My Sky (Free verse) by anitawit

(9.9.99) My eyes opened on an empty sky But the colour was blue Of deep deep cobalt; Of big and small Pieces of fortune I made my choice I watched my sky Fill up There are now Many kites in my sky.

anyone 1-Apr-04/1:05 PM
The ending is a bit choppy rhythmically




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