Re: Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT	10-Jan-06/12:32 PM
Very nice. I've been to the Birmingham Botanical Gardens many times. I had to walk down that gravel path barefoot once -- long story. And I've always wanted to fish in the Japanese Pond.
Re: a comment on Towards the Sun or The keeper of the bay they call a pond by somemorepoetry	12-Dec-05/10:28 PM
You know how geese fly in a V-shape? That's the idea.
Re: a comment on Towards the Sun or The keeper of the bay they call a pond by somemorepoetry	12-Dec-05/3:09 PM
Thank you for taking the time to really read it and for all the suggestions. You caught me with a rough draft.
Re: a comment on Low Tide by somemorepoetry	18-Jul-05/11:47 PM
How do you mean that? Do you mean in terms of the theme, the imagery, the structure, etc.? Because if you mean in terms of the structure and the less poetic diction than it was done purposefully...but then it again, it might have been an ineffective technique.
Re: a comment on Fingers Are Soldiers by somemorepoetry	28-Apr-05/9:33 AM
thanks. It's actually about writing.
Re: Carnival Creatures by <{Baba^Yaga}>	27-Apr-05/7:37 PM
I'm not sure if you need a question mark at the end or not, but this was good either way.
Re: To sow and reap by somemorepoetry	8-Mar-04/7:51 PM
just an attempt at actually using a rhyme scheme of some sort
Re: a comment on Homecoming by somemorepoetry	27-Feb-04/3:24 PM
what do you mean? any suggestions?
Re: a comment on Homecoming by somemorepoetry	26-Feb-04/1:41 PM
thanks
Re: Ivory, slaves and gold by horus8	18-Dec-03/7:48 PM
i have just been educated
Re: The Lion and the worm. by <{Baba^Yaga}>	14-Dec-03/7:59 PM
Nicely put...good use of the good book