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To sow and reap (Free verse) by somemorepoetry
We will meet again, Somewhere south of here, Where I once planted my grain And thought of the warm summer months ahead. There is something that draws near As the wind turns the vane, Like a distant memory born In the things I wished I had said To those I could see in dreams but could not hear. I wince at the pain, Thrashing my limbs, Like the stalks of corn I marched through when the sky was red. There is nothing I hold so dear, As a few more hours before the rain Bursts from the clouds overhead, And forces me to leave these fields wet with dreams Of all the years I have missed Going, never coming, on some lonely train.

Up the ladder: Geese
Down the ladder: You can go no further.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8
Weighted score: 5.2145653
Overall Rank: 4361
Posted: March 8, 2004 7:50 PM PST; Last modified: March 8, 2004 7:50 PM PST
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[n/a] somemorepoetry @ 207.69.140.22 | 8-Mar-04/7:51 PM | Reply
just an attempt at actually using a rhyme scheme of some sort
[n/a] zodiac @ 152.31.228.13 > somemorepoetry | 9-Mar-04/1:49 PM | Reply
I think it's a great one! Next, you'll want to do the same thing with more original rhyming sounds. Still, good start!
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