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1-Aug-02/5:01 PM |
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Really well done i love the description of the surroundings
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| Re: recent submissions by <~> |
1-Aug-02/5:03 PM |
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nice but short but cool anyway
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| Re: recent submissions by <~> |
1-Aug-02/6:14 PM |
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who is this person u speak of?
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| Re: the only square cloud by silvertongueddevil |
1-Aug-02/9:32 PM |
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i love the talk of sex without actually sex talk
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3-Aug-02/2:44 PM |
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Pretty good maybe i should pick up some pointers from u
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| Re: Existence by ThoughtfulSoul |
4-Aug-02/4:19 PM |
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i only erase ur comments cause they do nothing but confuse me and hinder my abilities so please write something useful next time
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| Re: The One I think About by ThoughtfulSoul |
4-Aug-02/4:20 PM |
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i only wonder if mother knows something is really wrong with her backwards child
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4-Aug-02/4:39 PM |
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4-Aug-02/5:11 PM |
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i think its sweet and i do agree im not an all dark person i do believe in love
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4-Aug-02/5:28 PM |
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clever but could use a body of words it would work better
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| Re: Broken Promise by VintageLove08 |
4-Aug-02/6:27 PM |
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good and very well written
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| Re: Hot Maid by Agemo-Z |
5-Aug-02/6:19 AM |
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you have the making of a good porno a little more kinky talk and you will have it
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| Re: Reality by ThoughtfulSoul |
5-Aug-02/4:35 PM |
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Ur right most of the people on this site are jerks thanks for the helpful tips
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| Re: Existence by ThoughtfulSoul |
5-Aug-02/4:43 PM |
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u try to be so smart, maybe just maybe if u spent that much thought on ur own poetry it would be a little better
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| Re: Existence by ThoughtfulSoul |
5-Aug-02/4:44 PM |
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tell me what u think first about the chinese kids who probably mad ur adidas
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| Re: Reality by ThoughtfulSoul |
6-Aug-02/11:00 AM |
I sense a lot of inner anger. You can talk to me about how ur dad touch as a little
child i will understand it's not ur fault that he loves the feel of little boy's penis
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| Re: Existence by ThoughtfulSoul |
6-Aug-02/11:05 AM |
I wonder what the hell u kids go through to have so much anger the world is not
perfect and neither are u or me so please stuff something in that fucking big mouth of
urs and shut it
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| Re: Existence by ThoughtfulSoul |
6-Aug-02/4:05 PM |
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i understand being patient but u guys act so fucking childish just once try getting ur heads out ur asses and being an understanding person
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| Re: seven rings by memorybabe |
24-Oct-03/6:48 PM |
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i enjoyed this poem, keep up the good work
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