on Existence by ThoughtfulSoul
5 Aug 2002, 4:43 PM
u try to be so smart, maybe just maybe if u spent that much thought on ur own poetry it would be a little better
on recent submissions by <~>
1 Aug 2002, 6:14 PM
who is this person u speak of?
on Broken Promise by VintageLove08
4 Aug 2002, 6:27 PM
good and very well written
on Existence by ThoughtfulSoul
5 Aug 2002, 4:44 PM
tell me what u think first about the chinese kids who probably mad ur adidas
on The One I think About by ThoughtfulSoul
4 Aug 2002, 4:20 PM
i only wonder if mother knows something is really wrong with her backwards child
on the only square cloud by silvertongueddevil
1 Aug 2002, 9:32 PM
i love the talk of sex without actually sex talk
on some deleted poem
3 Aug 2002, 2:44 PM
Pretty good maybe i should pick up some pointers from u
on Existence by ThoughtfulSoul
6 Aug 2002, 4:05 PM
i understand being patient but u guys act so fucking childish just once try getting ur heads out ur asses and being an understanding person
on Reality by ThoughtfulSoul
6 Aug 2002, 11:00 AM
I sense a lot of inner anger. You can talk to me about how ur dad touch as a little
child i will understand it's not ur fault that he loves the feel of little boy's penis
child i will understand it's not ur fault that he loves the feel of little boy's penis
on Existence by ThoughtfulSoul
6 Aug 2002, 11:05 AM
I wonder what the hell u kids go through to have so much anger the world is not
perfect and neither are u or me so please stuff something in that fucking big mouth of
urs and shut it
perfect and neither are u or me so please stuff something in that fucking big mouth of
urs and shut it
on Existence by ThoughtfulSoul
4 Aug 2002, 4:19 PM
i only erase ur comments cause they do nothing but confuse me and hinder my abilities so please write something useful next time
on some deleted poem
4 Aug 2002, 4:39 PM
weird
on some deleted poem
4 Aug 2002, 5:11 PM
i think its sweet and i do agree im not an all dark person i do believe in love
on some deleted poem
4 Aug 2002, 5:28 PM
clever but could use a body of words it would work better
on some deleted poem
1 Aug 2002, 5:01 PM
Really well done i love the description of the surroundings
on recent submissions by <~>
1 Aug 2002, 5:03 PM
nice but short but cool anyway
on Reality by ThoughtfulSoul
5 Aug 2002, 4:35 PM
Ur right most of the people on this site are jerks thanks for the helpful tips
on seven rings by memorybabe
24 Oct 2003, 6:48 PM
i enjoyed this poem, keep up the good work