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Broken Promise (Free verse) by VintageLove08
Lies, Lies, everywhere
You don't care
You don't care
Break my heart time after time
So often does the number climb
What's another gonna matter?
Everyday feeling sadder
Anger rising
No compromising
You changed your mind?
That's not surprising
It's merely painful
I've become disdainful
Unconcerned
But not ungrateful
Enough with your distorted words
The hope I had again is tainted
Hide the lament deep inside
Beneath a face forever painted
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.1666665
Weighted score: 4.7758822
Overall Rank: 11344
Posted: August 4, 2002 5:38 PM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2002 5:38 PM PDT
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