poemranker ::Such is life by Alan2168

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Free verse № 7117

Such is life

by Alan2168

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 Aug 2002 · 2 comments

It begins at the top, Working its way down, In bursts and spurts. Two mingle together. Irregular erratic beat always the way, Steady rhythym beyond my grasp. The pace slackens off, But the heat is on.

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[1] ==Doylum 1-Aug-02/5:50 AM Reply
what a horrible little poem
i read the other day
oh back to this one em well
i like the idea of an irregular erratic beat.
[7] horus8 10-Dec-03/4:56 PM Reply
Glen Frey me a craw daddy.