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Such is life (Free verse) by Alan2168 It begins at the top,
Working its way down,
In bursts and spurts.
Two mingle together.
Irregular erratic beat always the way,
Steady rhythym beyond my grasp.
The pace slackens off,
But the heat is on.
Up the ladder:
Tarantasaurus Trecks
Down the ladder:
Broken Promise
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Posted: August 1, 2002 2:58 AM PDT; Last modified: August 1, 2002 2:58 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.7758822 Overall Rank: 11338 Comments:
Glen Frey me a craw daddy.
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i read the other day
oh back to this one em well
i like the idea of an irregular erratic beat.