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Such is life
(
Free verse
) by
Alan2168
It begins at the top, Working its way down, In bursts and spurts. Two mingle together. Irregular erratic beat always the way, Steady rhythym beyond my grasp. The pace slackens off, But the heat is on.
==Doylum
1-Aug-02/5:50 AM
what a horrible little poem
i read the other day
oh back to this one em well
i like the idea of an irregular erratic beat.
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