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Broken Promise (Free verse) by VintageLove08

Lies, Lies, everywhere You don't care You don't care Break my heart time after time So often does the number climb What's another gonna matter? Everyday feeling sadder Anger rising No compromising You changed your mind? That's not surprising It's merely painful I've become disdainful Unconcerned But not ungrateful Enough with your distorted words The hope I had again is tainted Hide the lament deep inside Beneath a face forever painted

ThoughtfulSoul 4-Aug-02/6:27 PM
good and very well written




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