Re: Bus Fare Home by peaceseeker	15-Oct-03/9:41 AM
Is the hot waterfall a shower? I once saw an episode of Batman where the Joker turned the city's water supply into jelly, and Commissioner Gordon unwittingly had a shower and got jelly on him.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Oct-03/10:02 AM
Now look, just what's going on here. Your name is obvioulsy a cunning contraction of the name Alex Turner, otherwise known as "Burgerheart". Just who are you?
Re: An Ode to the cat fish head helmet on your penis by horus8	15-Oct-03/10:22 AM
Look, no one's forcing you to sit next to people with mobile telephones.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Oct-03/4:34 PM
I have the same experience before my morning dose of ketamine.
Re: October 21st by calliope	16-Oct-03/8:22 AM
Like in "The Sixth Sense?"
Re: voyeur by richa	16-Oct-03/8:39 AM
Will these hands ne'er be dry?
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/5:17 PM
I think such an explicit poem about rape is very insensitive. But then that's just my personal opinion.
Re: Facial Bliss by ARTIE	17-Oct-03/5:30 PM
Savory display is a totally bodacious line to end a haiku with. However, the previous lines do not do it justice. I suggest something like: Oh, such tasty treats, Sausage rolls and cheese pasties, Savory display.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/5:31 PM
I think smoking is naughty, guns or otherwise.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/5:33 PM
I gave this poem a -1-, because I couldn't be bothered to scroll down the "Please Vote" menu to display the zero option.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/5:34 PM
Have you evet seen "The Fall and Rise of Reginal Perin"?
Re: Night On the Town by razorgrin	17-Oct-03/5:36 PM
Once I went on a night out with the lads. We got so drunk that we stole a traffic cone. Can you believe it? Boy, that was a crazy night, I can tell you. Never again... ;-)
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Oct-03/5:14 AM
I am the master of sonnets. No one else is allowed to write them.
Re: Torment by ThoughtfulSoul	18-Oct-03/5:19 AM
I always thought that poetry was wet and only for squares. I also thought that it couldn't be relevant to the youth of today. However, then I saw that you had used the phrase "mother fucker" at the end of your poem, and I realised just how wrong I had been. This really hit me hard.
Re: Halloween by ramtheman1	18-Oct-03/5:25 AM
I think it's a good job you copyrighted this poem, in case any poetry tycoons try to steal your work. -10-
Re: ditched by them slowpokes by skaskowski	18-Oct-03/5:27 AM
first verse: 10 Second verse: 0 Average: 5
Re: My Guardian Angel by ramtheman1	18-Oct-03/5:45 AM
You have a very distinctive and individual style, which I like. I think you may enjoy some of my work (although it is sometimes misunderstood).
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Oct-03/6:22 PM
I think that you have missed the point somewhat. Poetry is about feelngs and emotions, not logic and computerised codes. Although this poem may be correct in its syntax, it has no real value as a representation of your inner soul.
Re: Metaphysical Poets by Bachus	18-Oct-03/6:26 PM
Having read this poem, I have resolved to stop writing poetry merely for its commercial value, and also to desist in my skag habit.
Re: September 11, 2001: That Day by blues361	18-Oct-03/6:29 PM
I suppose you have a right to talk about these terrible events. However, they stir up horrible memories in me that I would rather forget.