| Re: facku by J.B. Manning |
10-Oct-03/11:53 AM |
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| Re: a comment on facku by J.B. Manning |
10-Oct-03/11:53 AM |
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It's been a stressful couple of weeks and I've been WAAAAAy too serious. So I wrote it for the sake of commical comments. lol.
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| Re: a comment on Life on the Sidewalk (with superfluous vulgarisms) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
9-Oct-03/10:29 AM |
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Gawd, what a terribly constructed sentence that was...lol...zzzzzzzzzz
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| Re: a comment on Wanting by J.B. Manning |
9-Oct-03/10:15 AM |
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Oh, ok, well that's actually funny then.
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| Re: a comment on Life on the Sidewalk (with superfluous vulgarisms) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
8-Oct-03/12:21 PM |
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Well Dark, you'll have to wait, only a short while. All the poetry I have posted at present were writing a year or two ago. I'm still developing a new style and I'd like to perform it on stage prior to posting. You'll be the first to know.
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| Re: a comment on Life on the Sidewalk (with superfluous vulgarisms) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
8-Oct-03/12:17 PM |
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haha, now that's creative.
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| Re: a comment on Wanting by J.B. Manning |
8-Oct-03/12:15 PM |
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What are you talking about? haha was a real option? Interesting. I'm glad you shared that.
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| Re: a comment on Wanting by J.B. Manning |
7-Oct-03/5:03 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Life on the Sidewalk (with superfluous vulgarisms) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
7-Oct-03/5:02 PM |
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and really dickless_mystery, you bore me. At least Dark_Angel was creative in his wit.
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| Re: a comment on Life on the Sidewalk (with superfluous vulgarisms) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
7-Oct-03/4:57 PM |
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My IQ is not a measure of my experience, meaning that I'm certain that you Dark_Angel have had many more years to hone your intellect than I. I have not doubt that in the years to come, my own shall be as sharp as yours.
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| Re: a comment on Life on the Sidewalk (with superfluous vulgarisms) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
7-Oct-03/3:15 PM |
Grendal - Do you really think using racially derogatory terms makes your insults more substantial? I'm afraid it only reflects your own inability to form a concise insult. Really, please discontinue your degradation of the white population, with verbal attacks against the black population. I'm tired of cleaning up for messes like yourself. It's really getting old.
BTW - clusure, is spelled closure and it appears that dispite your perspective of our friend here, he can at least spell. So honor us that much before you attack someone else.
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| Re: a comment on Life on the Sidewalk (with superfluous vulgarisms) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
7-Oct-03/3:10 PM |
109? Haha. I have a 113 and I grew up in the trailer park next to your bad side of town, so I could care less where you're from. The only thing giant about you is your head and you're the one who started shit with me dickless_mystery. It's not my fault you can't stop licking the tip of my poetic dick and calling it criticism. Try being polite from time to time and see how much further that takes you, instead of acting like some freaking snob from cherry tree park. If you have an opinion about my work, that's one thing, but if you think I'm going to sit back and let you rudely insult me out of spite for your own self pity, you can forget it. I came to this site to share my poetry with other poets and other than Darky, I attacked no one first. I don't appreciate you or any of these other pompous pricks thinking they can just push around the little guy. So you think I'm backing down just because you THINK you're smarter than me, you can forget it! -- OOPs, I'm sorry, is this paragraph to, "Massive," for you? Maybe you should stick to reading Dr. Seuss and I'll leave you alone. Btw, do you feel better about yourself every time you insult someone else? Sure sign of insecurity, if you ask me. It's ok though, I understand. As long as you feel better.
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| Re: a comment on Wanting by J.B. Manning |
7-Oct-03/2:01 PM |
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That's right Dave, slurp it up. You know you can't get enough.
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| Re: a comment on Wanting by J.B. Manning |
6-Oct-03/1:45 PM |
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And I love how you, of all people, have the nerve to call me arrogant. The second most pompous of all raised noises on this site. Btw, Dave, if my poetry is so terrible, why don't you stop reading it. I tire of your constant swaying on the tip of my dick anyway.
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| Re: a comment on Life on the Sidewalk (with superfluous vulgarisms) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
6-Oct-03/10:55 AM |
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uh huh, riiiight. Give us some more of your ghetto suffering poetry. We haven't heard enough yet. Come on ?-Dickless_Mystery-?
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| Re: a comment on The man, the world by INTRANSIT |
6-Oct-03/10:52 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Wanting by J.B. Manning |
6-Oct-03/10:48 AM |
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Wow, how long did it take you to think that up? Whatever ?-Dickless_Mystery-?
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| Re: Death by Artemis745 |
3-Oct-03/4:00 PM |
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"death" is only a he, because you make him one in your poem. Death is not the last thing, but the least thing.
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| Re: The man, the world by INTRANSIT |
3-Oct-03/3:45 PM |
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I think this is the best poem I've read on this yet to date. Honestly.
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| Re: The Devil & Me by Artemis745 |
3-Oct-03/3:27 PM |
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I flows smoothly, but there are a couple parts that I feel were...well that they were for lack of better words, basically. Like, "a God of thunder," I dunno...seemed like something you would write when you'er young.
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