Re: Untitled by Piano	11-Oct-03/3:09 PM
Each stanza needs to have more of a flow to the next.
Re: Midnight by jfackf	11-Oct-03/3:07 PM
Interesting.
Re: Battered moon by revy13	11-Oct-03/3:06 PM
Like the main idea of this poem. Some of the lines do not flow well enough with the rest.
Re: standing on the dry weeds by silvertongueddevil	11-Oct-03/10:41 AM
Like the fact that there is no capitalization. However, I think that if you are not going to have any of that then you should also leave out punctuation. Just my opinion though.
Re: Snow Storm by tsolantzr	11-Oct-03/10:40 AM
The last line does not fit the rest of the poem very well. A little work on it and this poem would be fairly good.
Re: a comment on Die by Artemis745	11-Oct-03/10:32 AM
My poetry is my poetry. I only write when I have a really strong emotion that I am having problems dealing with, many times it will give me depressing poems. I refuse to change my poems just because of the fact that they are all along the same emotion.
Re: a comment on My Angel's Suicide by Artemis745	11-Oct-03/10:29 AM
I agree. However, this is a poem and it isn't really true to life. It's fantasy. That is what makes it enjoyable.