| Re: a comment on Once by phoenixxx |
15-Jun-03/10:07 AM |
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I apologize. I was inspired by those 2 lines to write this poem when I first read the book. I used the lines and then didn't look at the poem for over a year, therefore did not remember from whence they were taken.
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| Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
14-Jun-03/11:06 AM |
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What is this supposed to be? Its a random, half introspection inspired and begun with a third grade rhyme. True, I don't like you and think you are an idiot, but this poem deserves low marks anyways.
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| Re: a comment on Once by phoenixxx |
14-Jun-03/11:03 AM |
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They aren't plagarized, they're borrowed. If you're going to try and be insulting in a forum such as this please use correct spelling and grammar. Also, try and see if you can refrain from the foul language.
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| Re: Sweet, Sweet... Daddy by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
13-Jun-03/2:48 PM |
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Wow, that's pretty bad. The poem makes an attempt at something important, but falls far short. In your comments, and your poem you lack syntax and proper grammar. Find a new hobby.
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| Re: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike |
12-Jun-03/1:42 PM |
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| Re: My girl by simone_girard |
12-Jun-03/1:39 PM |
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Wow, that had some potential, had some good points, but you tried to hard to rhyme it and so it all fell apart. Good effort though.
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