| Re: Fit for a King by dougsoderstrom |
7-Nov-02/4:37 AM |
There once was a strange man called George
Who from nowhere could fashion a war
He won notoriety
And caused much hilarity
His words he was forced to disgorge.
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7-Nov-02/4:42 AM |
And you started so well! Evil dictators should be tried by international tribunals, not stabbed in the eyes with forks. We should start with trying Bush for war crimes in Afghanistan.
I like the self-censorship of writing f*cking. What are you scared of?
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| Re: Ulrika-ka-ka (In Utero, track 4) by Tascobar |
7-Nov-02/4:44 AM |
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Nice. But I don't get the Nirvana reference.
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7-Nov-02/4:48 AM |
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Man City are indeed a mighty team, but not as mighty as the very mighty Stockport County.
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| Re: Cantos part mmx (The Mud Poem) by bondjedi |
7-Nov-02/4:52 AM |
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Ezra would have been proud. The dirty fascist.
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| Re: Emotionless by Roisin |
7-Nov-02/4:53 AM |
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Nice. You combine the haiku with concrete poetry - the poem is jagged because of the lenght of the middle line.
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8-Nov-02/2:18 AM |
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Stick that up your bollocks! (as Roy Keane said to Mick McCarthy)
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| Re: Perversions by razorgrin |
8-Nov-02/2:25 AM |
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15-Nov-02/3:26 AM |
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Abraham Lincoln didn't fart. Nor does the Queen. I'm not sure if Tony does or not. Alistair Campbell certainly does.
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15-Nov-02/3:30 AM |
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Not as good as part one. You're losing your touch. I can't help it that my encyclopaedic knowledge of popular culture enabled me to spot your plagiarism. By the way, Tom Jones is a twat.
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15-Nov-02/3:32 AM |
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I know where to find wisdom. But it's a secret. Send me ??1,000,000 and I might let you know.
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| Re: My love for another. by cleverdevice |
15-Nov-02/4:09 AM |
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This isn't a sonnet. It ain't iambic. There's nothing wrong with it, but it's not a sonnet. Call it something else.
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| Re: Duff by Off_Chance |
19-Nov-02/4:50 AM |
Duff Beer for you
Duff Beer for me
You have a Duff
I'll have one too.
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| Re: Litany of the Mullet by Shin-Bojangles |
19-Nov-02/4:51 AM |
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I think the fish must be offended by being compared to the haircut. Who had the best mullet in history? I vote for Kevin Keegan
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| Re: Time to Kill by Shin-Bojangles |
19-Nov-02/4:52 AM |
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The barn owl and the tawny owl - they're the main two.
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| Re: Orange Hills (Villanelle) by Moss |
20-Nov-02/1:34 AM |
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I'm unconvinced this is actually a villanelle, but then I'm an incorrigible pedant. It is pretty good, though; the first stanza is by far the best. Have you been reading the great Dylan? He was fond of his womb images.
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| Re: a genius by moonUnit |
20-Nov-02/1:43 AM |
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Are you the child of Mr. Zappa? This is a nicely melancholic, elegiac poem, and it uses the word shoulderblades. Excellent.
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22-Nov-02/3:32 AM |
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I think your subject matter kind of overwhelms the poem. There are are some very good images and phrases, but I'm not sure it hangs together.
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25-Nov-02/8:15 AM |
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I wondered why Ann Diamond more. Mark Owen actually made the best solo song of any ex-Take-That member. But it was still shit.
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25-Nov-02/8:16 AM |
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I don't do voodoo, but I do do judo. As Vic and Bob might say.
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