| Re: The Best This Dream Can Offer by Deborah Carter |
24-May-03/9:18 PM |
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I noticed this one is not arranged by Bill Murray...do you have another version or has this one not been edited as yet
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| Re: Blush Of The Winter Rose by kassanna |
27-May-03/3:27 PM |
Kassanna, regardless what anyone says, I think this is a beautiful heartfelt poem and the rhythym is very nice.
We have all had our gardners
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
29-May-03/7:16 PM |
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| Re: Midnight Dance by Deborah Carter |
31-May-03/11:04 PM |
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lovely, almost mystical and very nice rhythm
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| Re: The Best This Dream Can Offer(Revised) by Deborah Carter |
31-May-03/11:06 PM |
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I like this version a lot better...you got it going on girl
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| Re: I shot speed by horus8 |
31-May-03/11:19 PM |
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a little hard to dance to...i give it a 5
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| Re: There is no Happy Hour in Bakersfield, Ca. by horus8 |
1-Jun-03/6:24 AM |
this is more like the horus I enjoy reading...sorry about the 5 I gave on your other poem...maybe i shouldnt have been so smug and just said i didnt really care for it.sometimes, your poems get a little too involved and loose m half way through. most of the time though,I enjoy your writing....again..sorry
ps...lol...i see you have found all my poems and given me 5's....touche!
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