Re: a comment on Equestrian Dreams by Kamikaze	30-Jul-08/3:51 PM
This is an old one, actually. Only one of a few without the rhyme scheme. The Dora one is much more recent, and you'll note the greater sopistication of rhyme than say, the Barney one. (But if you don't like Purple Reign, you probably won't like any of my others, so...)
Re: a comment on Blood Plush by Kamikaze	30-Jul-08/3:48 PM
I understand pimples to be lovelorn, mopey, angst ridden poems about relationships of youth. Right? This is more my own brand of twisted kiddie rhyme or nursery rhyme. While 90% of them have simple rhyme patterns, I'll try the advice of loosening up the pattern with a couple of new ones upcoming. If you read all my poems, you'd also see that converging storylines evolve, but I only post the ones that can stand alone here. Go read Equestrian Dreams if you want to see what happens when I strip out the rhymes and go free verse. Even with similar subject material, the effect is not the same.
Re: Disregard the first line of this poem by T. Jonathron Remp	29-Jul-08/11:58 PM
Very clever! I breath of fresh air around here.
Re: a comment on Blood Plush by Kamikaze	29-Jul-08/11:50 PM
There is incongruity between your comment and your vote. I prefer love or hate to indifference, but not sure which you're feeling.
Re: a comment on Blood Plush by Kamikaze	29-Jul-08/11:41 PM
Don, I didn't realize you are also SupremeDreamer. I am surprised you like the previous two, but not this one. However, the rhymes are more sophisticated in La Llamada del Cholo as it is probably ten years newer than this one.
Re: a comment on Blood Plush by Kamikaze	29-Jul-08/11:07 PM
So why is a villanelle or limerick any more worthwhile? (Or any less strict?) Who says I haven't written prose or free verse? This is obviously not for you and resorting to flames and snippy comments isn't necessary.
Re: The Sleep Fantastic by nentwined	21-Jul-08/9:19 AM
mmmmm...Zombies! This sounds like me before coffee.
Re: a comment on Purple Reign of Blood by Kamikaze	21-Jul-08/9:05 AM
If I force some rhymes, it is for the comedic effect to mimic the sing-song cadence of a nursery rhyme. I experimented with this vein and a more free verse approach. It had a very different effect.
Re: a comment on Skull Soup v.2 by SupremeDreamer	11-Jul-08/3:08 PM
Aren't we all self-obsessed? Most writers are. I agree "shit" seemed out of place, but still one of your best. (version 2.0)
Re: a comment on Death of a Drug Addict by SupremeDreamer	11-Jul-08/2:59 PM
THIS from the author of "Limp Cock"?
Re: a comment on La Llamada del Cholo by Kamikaze	10-Jul-08/8:35 PM
Thank you for the praise. One of my best, if you get the references. Also some of my best rhymes, forced or otherwise. (nods to Kaolin)
Re: a comment on Purple Reign of Blood by Kamikaze	10-Jul-08/9:10 AM
Aren't most rhymes forced, especially in "nursery rhymes"?
Re: ode to boa:w/thanks to the 60's rock group, BloodRock by malpaso	30-Jun-08/3:17 PM
A dirge for modern life. This guy is nuts. I actually remember the song he's riffing on.