Re: a comment on Cloak Of Love by brokenwing	4-Feb-03/4:14 PM
Chopped it off, do you mean the end?, because the more i read it the more it does sound a little upbrupt. Any insight into it would be good. I'll let you use it...Cheers.
Re: a comment on Cloak Of Love by brokenwing	4-Feb-03/4:09 PM
Thanx..
Re: a comment on Cloak Of Love by brokenwing	4-Feb-03/4:07 PM
Very nicely put....Thanx for that!
Re: a comment on Cloak Of Love by brokenwing	4-Feb-03/4:05 PM
Why can't all my poems be about love?..I'm glad people have the ability to write about other things that they find worthy, but there is no law that says that someone has to cover every aspect of life in their writings...it would be like telling Stephen King to write a mills and boon book because you don't like reading horror. I appreciate your comment, but i'm a sentimentalist and don't see myself changing anytime soon...
Re: NASA Fireworks by TheDevil	2-Feb-03/6:07 AM
Some people are just so heartless....
Re: a comment on All I Feel by brokenwing	1-Feb-03/3:52 AM
Thank you....and thanks also for the spelling correction.
Re: a comment on All I Feel by brokenwing	30-Jan-03/8:19 PM
Inches just doesn't sit with me and why do you want me to read those two??
Re: a comment on All I Feel by brokenwing	30-Jan-03/8:14 PM
Why bad news....
Re: a comment on All I Feel by brokenwing	30-Jan-03/8:06 PM
Thank you for that comment, i had a hell of a time trying to find a better way of phrasing what i wanted to say. You did it after one reading....Cheers
Re: For Brianna by MaliqaTara	30-Jan-03/7:55 PM
Quite emmotional, I appreciate all that you conveyed in it..
Re: As I lay by Katie	30-Jan-03/7:50 PM
Liked it, has promise....
Re: a comment on Someone by brokenwing	30-Jan-03/7:22 PM
Thanx for the comments, I like to write thats what i do best(in my eyes anyway). I just wanted to put this poem in and get feedback for all the positive and negative aspects. I'm open to suggestions and appreciate the fact that you took time out to read it and comment.