Re: Never Forget by HipHopChick	16-Jul-02/9:57 PM
Nice and short, has a point. You coulda done without the 'chorus' part.
Re: moon rants by bluwiz	16-Jul-02/11:31 PM
the teenage moon an unconfident, whiney rock....I like it.
Re: Virus by bluwiz	16-Jul-02/11:39 PM
Damn, its like your poems seem shallow and kinda dumb to me on first read (prob. my own artistic ignorance)but then they're really very good. really like your work, more!
Re: Rented Romance by OneFingerAnswer	17-Jul-02/12:01 AM
lmao@Dark_Angel...I had the same thought!. But if ur talking about real people/relationships its a pretty good poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Jul-02/12:24 AM
If Ice Cube was a young, white surburban kid, this would be the inspiration for that 'Good Day' song/video
Re: Best Friends by ashtar	17-Jul-02/12:33 AM
Friendship troubles....damn
Re: Wipe Before You Weep by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	17-Jul-02/12:40 AM
Damnit! All peoms don't have to be serious,meaningful, or whatever to be good! this is funny! I say a five you
Re: Dear Dad by liquidlama	19-Jul-02/9:56 PM
Its more than an idea forestchild7.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Nov-02/11:30 AM
I like it. the sand in the wrinkled palm