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Best Friends (Free verse) by ashtar
dear friend Its about time i really think you should know the last time I saw you I wished for a hole right in your god damn head please please die just go away for a while dont be angry just try to fucking smile like you always do Ive never really thought like this never ever thought like this ? but thats a lie dont you fucking cry Ive always hated your everyay non chalant sympathetic bullshit ride hah like I ever gave a damn shut the fuck up and sit down youve had this fucking coming for a lifetime now you may think its bad now but this hasnt even started

Up the ladder: Flies
Down the ladder: Highgate Cemetery

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7521
Posted: July 16, 2002 11:57 PM PDT; Last modified: July 16, 2002 11:57 PM PDT
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Comments:
[8] liquidlama @ 66.217.81.33 | 17-Jul-02/12:33 AM | Reply
Friendship troubles....damn
[6] PawnedTidal @ 68.35.210.72 | 12-Sep-02/5:22 PM | Reply
Brutal. But good.
[9] pink_punk_kisses87 @ 216.60.216.66 | 12-Sep-02/6:36 PM | Reply
i feel for the person you wrote this for but i guess they deserved it.
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