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Never Forget (Free verse) by HipHopChick
Never forget where you came from Never forget your past When you make new friends in life, Don't put your old ones last Don't ever lose touch With an old friend you once knew Never forget where you came from Or the people who were good to you Never make such a big mistake As to let life pass you by Before you know it, the years are gone.. And you're an angel, flying high Never forget where you came from Or the people you once knew Don't forget them, or you'll regret it Because they'll forget you too

Up the ladder: And they both knew
Down the ladder: So

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1
Weighted score: 5.05
Overall Rank: 6823
Posted: July 8, 2002 6:32 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2002 6:32 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.164.194 | 12-Jul-02/7:48 AM | Reply
Yes. What useful advice. I'll be sure to take it on board. Thanks HipHopChick! You're so wise.
[7] liquidlama @ 66.217.81.33 | 16-Jul-02/9:57 PM | Reply
Nice and short, has a point. You coulda done without the 'chorus' part.
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