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Never Forget (Free verse) by HipHopChick

Never forget where you came from Never forget your past When you make new friends in life, Don't put your old ones last Don't ever lose touch With an old friend you once knew Never forget where you came from Or the people who were good to you Never make such a big mistake As to let life pass you by Before you know it, the years are gone.. And you're an angel, flying high Never forget where you came from Or the people you once knew Don't forget them, or you'll regret it Because they'll forget you too

liquidlama 16-Jul-02/9:57 PM
Nice and short, has a point. You coulda done without the 'chorus' part.




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