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Wipe Before You Weep (Ode) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. Were you weeping?
Did you cry?
Did you wipe tears from your eye?
No; I see you haven't wiped.
Your pants, once new, are old and striped.
Striped with greed,
Striped with sin.
Go and put them in the bin.
Oh, I see. Now you weep.
Go to bed and go to sleep!
New pants in the morn you'll find.
Fresh; untouched by your behind.
And if they e'er with brown are lined
You'll find I shall be most unkind.
What? You've found my secret trove?
Hidden 'neath the mangrove grove?
Put that back! 'Tis not for you!
No! I swear! That's not my poo!
NOOOO!!!!!
Up the ladder:
Never Let Go Again
Down the ladder:
Sweet Dreams
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.9714284
Posted: June 8, 2002 4:25 PM PDT; Last modified: June 8, 2002 4:25 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.971438 Overall Rank: 8385 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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deleted user @ 217.158.31.102
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8-Jul-02/3:00 AM
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excellent. it's so difficult to write down to a seven year old child.
Damnit! All peoms don't have to be serious,meaningful, or whatever to be good! this is funny! I say a five you
I'm afraid they do, liquidlama. I'm afraid they do.
couldn't agree more liquidlama you . each to their own
Few things compare to the sinful pleasure of giving a Dark_Angel piece a good score. Funny ha-ha, not funny queer.
i luv u like a red haired hermaphrodite. you no polite. with poo. you do. vou-doo. longer then a turkish water-pipe. i trust your hype.aslolol.
crap
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