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Sweet Dreams (Free verse) by MistressSnow
Hello lover, hello stranger
I've missed you in the daylight
I've words for you deep in my heart
I've been dying to say right
For when you pass the sun shined window
I never greet your face
Instead of beautiful unity
Your shadows' left in place
The only time our hearts combine
Is when we do not know
It's when we whisper in our sleep
That our true feelings show
Our days are filled with coldness
The night's a warming fire
It's when you mumble in your dreams
I know you're not a liar
I shiver in the mornings
And in the afternoon
Longing for your tender touch
I pray to slumber soon
For when we lie down at night
Those hours I love the most
It's while we're sleeping side by side
You reach to hold me close
Goodnight lover, goodnight stranger
I've missed you in the daylight
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8386
Posted: August 24, 2002 9:23 PM PDT; Last modified: August 25, 2002 11:45 AM PDT
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