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Sweet Dreams (Free verse) by MistressSnow

Hello lover, hello stranger I've missed you in the daylight I've words for you deep in my heart I've been dying to say right For when you pass the sun shined window I never greet your face Instead of beautiful unity Your shadows' left in place The only time our hearts combine Is when we do not know It's when we whisper in our sleep That our true feelings show Our days are filled with coldness The night's a warming fire It's when you mumble in your dreams I know you're not a liar I shiver in the mornings And in the afternoon Longing for your tender touch I pray to slumber soon For when we lie down at night Those hours I love the most It's while we're sleeping side by side You reach to hold me close Goodnight lover, goodnight stranger I've missed you in the daylight

MistressSnow 25-Aug-02/11:46 AM
Thanks so much, I don't know how that happened! I fixed it, thanks again!




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