Re: firelight lost by irishfolksuicide	12-Jul-02/6:28 PM
'cast across your cinder breath'.. i want to write like you when i grow up.
Re: Daughter by pkdrunner	11-Jul-02/8:28 PM
love the last line
Re: Love Obsession (the stalker's song) by evergreen	11-Jul-02/8:26 PM
hope i'm replying right.. i am not the stalker - my ex was. good luck with your stalking career :)
Re: This Is The Sound of My Heart Breaking by Owner of the Sky	11-Jul-02/4:13 PM
work on this one - the toilet sucking your accumulated toxins part could go first :). loved where you were heading with this.
Re: Proud to be black by girl	11-Jul-02/4:07 PM
really liked this - but the second line 'gesticulating benignly as i talk' somehow does not fit in well. loved the last 2 lines!