on firelight lost by irishfolksuicide
12 Jul 2002, 6:28 PM
'cast across your cinder breath'.. i want to write like you when i grow up.
on Love Obsession (the stalker's song) by evergreen
11 Jul 2002, 8:26 PM
hope i'm replying right.. i am not the stalker - my ex was. good luck with your stalking career :)
on This Is The Sound of My Heart Breaking by Owner of the Sky
11 Jul 2002, 4:13 PM
work on this one - the toilet sucking your accumulated toxins part could go first :). loved where you were heading with this.
on Proud to be black by girl
11 Jul 2002, 4:07 PM
really liked this - but the second line 'gesticulating benignly as i talk' somehow does not fit in well. loved the last 2 lines!