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5-Mar-04/2:39 AM |
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It was good until you used the word "fuck"...
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| Re: sonnet by hoopoe |
5-Mar-04/2:40 AM |
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| Re: dear jim d. by peaceseeker |
14-Mar-04/8:47 AM |
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Too many quotation marks, me head hurts
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| Re: My Stigmata: "Psychotica" by SupremeDreamer |
14-Mar-04/8:55 AM |
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i think i need to study this more, there's alot there
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| Re: what i see with strings by New Life Drug |
14-Mar-04/9:01 AM |
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It feels more like a run-on sentence than a poem, the images are too random=..some connect and some I just don't know...
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| Re: The Seagull Reader by SpiffyDoo |
16-Mar-04/12:36 AM |
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I like it but it doesn't read like a poem, at least until the last stanza, it reads more like a paragraph -- maybe that was your point - i still thought it was good
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| Re: Brethren, oblivion is not the road to the city Ataraxis II by SupremeDreamer |
7-Mar-06/5:42 AM |
Sounds like your preaching to me, I hate lectures.
And I don't fancy looking up every other word you write in the dictionary, I'm a simple man and big word don't impress me.
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| Re: Bobjim, Jimbob by Spider-Man |
9-Aug-06/12:45 AM |
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I usually like disgusting humorous shit , but this one made me a little sick to my stomach, maybe that's the point.
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| Re: Chickens by rnuk |
9-Aug-06/8:11 AM |
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Brilliant, simple and to the point. The ending is classic. Now I know about Marxism. Thanks.
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