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what i see with strings (Free verse) by New Life Drug
ive seen every
thing she could possibly
got to offer to you
i'm not sure you
could ever get quite
all that you wanted
im not
sure sure sure
i'll never
know know know
ive got memories of you
locked inside my heart and my head
and they're not getting out
and i feel the tear down my cheek
as it rolls it gets cold
as air hits it
i feel the blood on my leg
i imagine im imagining it all
and i know you're only a mile away
but silence makes the distance so longer
lack of conversation makes
seeing you feel stronger
and my eyes follow to wherever the light leads
staring up at this celing with fresh paint
reminds me of the moon
which in turn reminds me of you
and all i can do is hope that i'm not blind
the lights should be out
but why shouldnt i be able to see
this dull lovely nothing that comes through me
it settles here in all that i don't understand
and the sounds keep coming out
this could be the saddest song ive
ever sung now my ears are rung
dry with echos
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6719
Posted: March 13, 2004 7:56 PM PST; Last modified: March 13, 2004 7:56 PM PST
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