Re: killer boredom butterfly (esoteric) by nentwined	17-Dec-02/5:11 PM
Rings along nicely with your other poem...like a chorus line o.O Great...now this is stuck in my head XP
Re: killer boredom butterfly (psychedelic) by nentwined	17-Dec-02/5:10 PM
Reminds me of my dear ol' blue butterfly ^___^
Re: with no words to write by nentwined	17-Dec-02/5:08 PM
Hm, only thing that makes me twitch is that 'can't'. I think it would have a better ring to it if spelled 'cannot' Otherwise, it's lovely ^_^!
Re: a comment on Music That Cannot Exist (Next Verse) by Fetylum	17-Dec-02/6:08 AM
I think we just completed the replies at the same time. It happens. Thank you very much ^_^
Re: a comment on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8	17-Dec-02/2:23 AM
Your lucky I'm not male then ^___^
Re: a comment on Music That Cannot Exist (Next Verse) by Fetylum	17-Dec-02/2:10 AM
as he shall appear in every end.
Re: Am I Still Here? by Ranger	17-Dec-02/1:57 AM
Very beautiful indeed. I love your form of poetry.
Re: a comment on Music That Cannot Exist (Next Verse) by Fetylum	17-Dec-02/1:54 AM
*points down to her earlier reply to you comment*
Re: a comment on Music That Cannot Exist (Next Verse) by Fetylum	17-Dec-02/1:53 AM
That is part of the mystery behind the music that cannot exist. I will save that for when I complete writing about the music that cannot exist.. But why they are blue? Well, blue seems to be a well known color for sorrow, worries and pain. When the music starts, the butterflies symbolizing pain all that of which the person holds, is, to bluntly, smashed.
Re: a comment on Music That Cannot Exist by Fetylum	17-Dec-02/1:42 AM
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm... Nope. But, I wonder how it would be for someone on acid to read it? X.x
Re: a comment on Music That Cannot Exist (Next Verse) by Fetylum	17-Dec-02/1:37 AM
The blue butterflies are a simble of when the Musc That Cannot Exist, begins.
Re: I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8	17-Dec-02/1:18 AM
.... ......... L O L And I thought I was bad... Good use of really bad creativity, I give it..a TEN! Just because you made me laugh...
Re: a comment on Music That Cannot Exist by Fetylum	16-Dec-02/5:52 PM
If anyone did press Alt-F4, I would probably die. Keep in mind that while the music that cannot exist is playing, the quotations and such are some of the problems..worries..cares..and random things that is thrown from ones mind while the music is playing. Oyoy.
Re: a comment on Music That Cannot Exist by Fetylum	16-Dec-02/5:50 PM
Goodness...I knew that sounded off. I wrote this at the height of my insomnia, so do please forgive that horridly upstate error.
Re: a comment on Music That Cannot Exist by Fetylum	16-Dec-02/10:46 AM
The music that cannot exist, is exactly how it sounds. You know those songs that you just -have- to dance to. You can't totally control yourself? The music that cannot exist, it overtakes you entirely in some form or another, (I plan writing many different version of the song/poem). In this poem, I am in the drivers seat, two others -two other sets of eyes-, also in the car. As the music that cannot exist plays, it totally engulfs us, flashing away all our cares and worries. Quotes like, "You can't because you don't," refers to the things in life..you just wouldn't do. But with the music, all that falls away. We pretty much, drive chaotically about, through meadows, streets, sidewalks, etcetera.. 'press X' -twenty points will give you 50 years- (Twisted Metal thing..You run people over and get points -_-) Well, sooner or later, we crash. But the music doesn't stop. The cops come and so forth. He takes us out of the car, and we are more or less stunned and confused, blank really. He puts us into his car, starts the car and turns on the radio. The music that cannot exist starts again.. And the process starts all over again. So that about explains some of it...