| Re: Pages by Quarton |
16-Dec-02/9:19 AM |
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Don't believe it; there's always time to go beyond the past failures and neglect. One can become the 'Chief' again; I know I'm headed there myself, I can feel it in my angry tears, in my sighs of past frustration. The clouds show teeth, razors of new horizons, bold interpretations of what's to come, what will be, by my hand, through angry resolve-9
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16-Dec-02/9:21 AM |
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huh, or should I say 'duh'
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| Re: HGH 1000 (human growth hormone) fountain of youth? by Bachus |
16-Dec-02/9:29 AM |
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Very funny. I love 'smart-ass humor.' -8
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| Re: Goes the Spoils by <~> |
16-Dec-02/9:36 AM |
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Interesting. I can see my own friends at far away, far awhen bars,from the time before when I still longed for raucous nights of confusion and soulful empathy.-8
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18-Dec-02/6:33 AM |
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It seems to be missing just a little something in the middle, but, I like it; I think it's tone of pointed obscurity is interesting.
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| Re: A christmas thought by keatsImnot |
18-Dec-02/6:36 AM |
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I like the tempo and the mood; the insertion of provocative insight is nice, also.-8
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18-Dec-02/6:49 AM |
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I think it's a mistake to consider rhyme so important in the body of a poem to tell a story; when rhyme is forced it's phony and strained. Spontanaety(?)is an important element to producing vivid emotional poetic scenes.
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| Re: lackluster fear by blackball |
18-Dec-02/7:01 AM |
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Interesting; obscure meaning is nice.
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18-Dec-02/7:04 AM |
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?obtrusion of my center? Fill me in, I can't get it through context.
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18-Dec-02/7:06 AM |
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I like this. It's similar to my own feelings sometimes.
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| Re: pledging allegiance by moonUnit |
18-Dec-02/7:08 AM |
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| Re: wax by New Life Drug |
18-Dec-02/7:13 AM |
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Well despite what others think, I like it, it's fun.
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| Re: Writers Resume' by wordsy |
18-Dec-02/7:50 AM |
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Nice tempo. good poem...I think.
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18-Dec-02/8:06 AM |
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That Malcolm, kat's, got groove.-9
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20-Dec-02/1:20 PM |
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Well, I for one like it. It already has a lot of meaning, at least, I perceive meaning and theme where it may or may not exist. I am a great lover of disillusion and modern day angst. Irony and subtly sarcastic wit, though are only, it seems to me, for the somewhat tuned in and globally empathic.
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| Re: Foreplay by INTRANSIT |
23-Dec-02/7:33 AM |
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Is this some sort of pasta dish you're enjoying? I like it, despite whether I'm correct in my naive assumption.
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30-Dec-02/12:49 PM |
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I agree with ranger, this is quite good; Somber, thoughtful, and beautiful.
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| Re: Bumming kiddies by Bobjim |
30-Dec-02/12:50 PM |
whoever you are you're horrible and full af hate and bitterness.
Go kill yourself.
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30-Dec-02/12:52 PM |
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