poemranker ::20 most recent comments by lilli and replies

Comments bylilli, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

on forever looking (in) by muted_screams 27 May 2002, 8:55 AM
don't feel sorry for yourself, petal. Life's too short... He wasn't worth it, anyway. You can tell.
on art by feelinglistless 27 May 2002, 8:43 AM
It's a rather rosy view of inspiration or art, 'lost careers' notwithstanding...
on lurcher for lunch - for James Kelman by roy rocket 27 May 2002, 2:45 AM
have you read tom leonard? I think you'd like him.
on actually chicken and mushroom pies are nice too by cav 27 May 2002, 2:38 AM
how about 'testicular' appearance -scans better?
on Jericho by goldfish 23 May 2002, 2:37 AM
you could cut some of the philiosophising, because that seems rhyme driven and doesn't really make sense. I kind of agree with the Rush lyrics: actually, it reminds me of a songs by early 70s band the Strawbs.. less said about that the better. But ballads are good, we like ballads...
on Tom and Jerry by WarrenGDawg 23 May 2002, 2:33 AM
I'm amazed by how many of these things I like: is this one meant to sound obscene?
on #3 by mikejedw 23 May 2002, 2:31 AM
Hey -- this isn't half bad! I think "floating world" is a cliche, though, as well as being scentifically inaccurate (poetry doesn't give you a licence you know..)