on art by feelinglistless
27 May 2002, 8:43 AM
It's a rather rosy view of inspiration or art, 'lost careers' notwithstanding...
on actually chicken and mushroom pies are nice too by cav
27 May 2002, 2:38 AM
how about 'testicular' appearance -scans better?
on lurcher for lunch - for James Kelman by roy rocket
27 May 2002, 2:45 AM
have you read tom leonard? I think you'd like him.
on forever looking (in) by muted_screams
27 May 2002, 8:55 AM
don't feel sorry for yourself, petal. Life's too short... He wasn't worth it, anyway. You can tell.
on some deleted poem
24 May 2002, 1:55 AM
Every time I try to visit the Evigan website my browser crashes...I guess I'm doomed not to know. Ta anyway, though it's still not a concrete poem...
on Tom and Jerry by WarrenGDawg
23 May 2002, 2:33 AM
I'm amazed by how many of these things I like: is this one meant to sound obscene?
you could cut some of the philiosophising, because that seems rhyme driven and doesn't really make sense. I kind of agree with the Rush lyrics: actually, it reminds me of a songs by early 70s band the Strawbs.. less said about that the better. But ballads are good, we like ballads...
on some deleted poem
23 May 2002, 5:56 AM
Who's Greg Evigan? It's funny though: nice to see someone thinking about words. Why is it in the concrete section?
on some deleted poem
24 May 2002, 1:48 AM
the image isn't terribly clear, which isn't necessarily a problem, but in a little poem like this, I think it has to be more precise