| Re: a comment on ... by logun2002ya |
14-Nov-02/7:46 PM |
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poetry is one colective though...at least that's how eye see it...the poems are written in my book of poetry and they are all together...just spaced out...so the dot dot dot...just implies continuation of thought...and so eye go...dot dot dot...
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| Re: a comment on ... by logun2002ya |
7-Nov-02/12:54 PM |
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hmm...dont really know what your talking about...if its the "..." then eye just never write titles...poetry is about expression of feelings and just write them down...eye have more than books of em...eye wrote my first poem when eye was five...and if you are talking about the "eye"...eye is possessive and eye am not a possessive person...so eye feel that eye better explains who eye be...for my eye see all eye do as a me...all the you's eye encounter...all the beauty eye see...all the feelings eye feel, trapped in emotion and peac3...then maybe eye am just crazy...hmmm...
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| Re: a comment on ... by logun2002ya |
30-Oct-02/4:26 PM |
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while your days are filled with mocking the spade, mine are filled with capturing the shade...the color of light, from the glimpse of a site, you will never see...for you curse yourself, when you try and curse me...
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| Re: a comment on ... by logun2002ya |
30-Oct-02/4:21 PM |
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you read it, and you responded to it, and eye am sorry if it impaired your sight...but truth be told...poetry is young as well as old...poetry is peace and wrath...poetry is taken and passed...comments come and go, you...noone will ever know...me...eye know who eye be...more than unique for mirror eyez catch the reflection of you as your gone...but my heart will transpire and carry on...watch what you say...eye might come to bite you one day...
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| Re: a comment on ... by logun2002ya |
30-Oct-02/4:13 PM |
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who the fuck is cummings?
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| Re: a comment on ... by logun2002ya |
29-Oct-02/5:10 PM |
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thank you...eye have a lot more but eye can only put up three...eye usually just get assholes replying with comments like "you suck eye is spelt I not e y e...even a looser knows that"...owell...gotta take the good with the bad...
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| Re: a comment on ... by logun2002ya |
29-Oct-02/5:03 PM |
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that is the most contrite and obvious critisism and it is usaually a sign...eye can see inside your mind, and loosers never fail...it doesn't matter how it's written, it doesnt matter what eye say, a good poet feels his heart and uses words to push his sway...obviously you try to be just like everyone else...me eye am unique...you should try it sometime
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