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... (Free verse) by logun2002ya
eye saw a love" one eye couldn,t taste' eye saw a dream from wich eye can,t awake... my life is a trip" a glass of milk can,t fix' eye need a break how long will this take... twelve hours" forever" eye don,t really care' cause here"... eye am a man' not aware... 4pace is deciet" eye dream without sleep" how long am eye awake"/ how much did eye take"/ are you really here"/ fuck it... eye dont care... you make me feel so good' eye,d take you anywhere... my soul lives on forever' with you it's just a day' eye'll take you as you cum... forever and a day.

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6
Weighted score: 4.713913
Overall Rank: 11951
Posted: October 28, 2002 2:00 AM PST; Last modified: October 28, 2002 2:00 AM PST
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Comments:
[0] limonade @ 142.166.234.57 | 29-Oct-02/9:45 PM | Reply
cummings you ain't.
[n/a] logun2002ya @ 205.188.209.77 > limonade | 30-Oct-02/4:13 PM | Reply
who the fuck is cummings?
[0] limonade @ 198.164.250.185 > logun2002ya | 30-Oct-02/6:53 PM | Reply
Your mom.
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