poemranker ::... by logun2002ya

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Free verse № 22705

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Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Oct 2002 · 3 comments

eye saw a love" one eye couldn,t taste' eye saw a dream from wich eye can,t awake... my life is a trip" a glass of milk can,t fix' eye need a break how long will this take... twelve hours" forever" eye don,t really care' cause here"... eye am a man' not aware... 4pace is deciet" eye dream without sleep" how long am eye awake"/ how much did eye take"/ are you really here"/ fuck it... eye dont care... you make me feel so good' eye,d take you anywhere... my soul lives on forever' with you it's just a day' eye'll take you as you cum... forever and a day.

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[0] limonade 29-Oct-02/9:45 PM Reply
cummings you ain't.
[n/a] logun2002ya › limonade 30-Oct-02/4:13 PM Reply
who the fuck is cummings?
[0] limonade › logun2002ya 30-Oct-02/6:53 PM Reply
Your mom.